【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 p' N# f+ [" S/ |4 ~; T歌词我附在后面。
# R* i6 I& ~0 I9 Z$ yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 ~: ]; ~5 Y  C# j1 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- ]8 P( n* x* `) q+ @) IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 P& S' s( e7 G- w) R9 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 u% e! B7 F: n  j; fThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ l: D; x/ ?& N$ n0 N8 _9 t  WSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# n+ t' U8 E; P  M5 {" A6 nYou needn’t fear anything
, p7 X, f% i) o  `2 f! T6 n5 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) E) s% ]  u! s8 V1 eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 z' E# s/ x+ {( b2 e+ d" ^" jNothing can compare to my love
1 s$ F4 N3 c9 o7 rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: m! S/ T# ], b! Z+ q4 ?$ dI want so much to see inside your heart
" N+ O/ \8 T+ {. ^) g7 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 D# K- R% s- [  [I regret not dying
+ c8 c0 O- u& ?. C: L5 X+ wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 h3 }8 j* [. S# V$ j$ z% ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* L% N% ?4 B5 n' J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) Y; H0 U: M% |3 |2 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: E% a" K2 L* ?/ ]8 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 ~8 W; G  _3 \1 z! ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ u5 z* ~! B1 e2 ^" E7 G9 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; c- Y) C" O9 e, u( l% `! J2 m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* _3 t+ y$ r  v. D( O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 |; u  c% P+ s" ?, ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 f  D" @; p7 H- o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 f& p5 P0 l& S! _/ P/ D- g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; C8 y& G3 b# V& a9 i9 F7 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ v2 p1 g. _8 \( x( g/ z1 G- v* i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% V: R% H% |. j; Y5 }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  p3 ^0 J9 @% q! Q1 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& v# t0 }3 K$ W( f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 S% `) l2 b0 ~: _, f$ x. g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, h5 t+ x9 _# G& y0 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* o, C, J. L% T: z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& |' P- a7 F3 N& y1 O; W) D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 }# W+ }5 y0 {* [9 I/ e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( j) r2 a  k, {, g; x- h. ]; ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# ~$ R1 n% N! h  r5 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 e2 p' @% B" R! e0 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ P. Q7 T' d. m0 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 k3 n5 u* `8 w( c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% p( f  w8 o! p+ @" ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- o6 Z1 _- ?# G% |3 Y- I4 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ b6 I( N& G" Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 X5 E' R0 r) n9 u; `' L2 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>