【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
  ~! J6 V: d) R- K袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

# E, w& O: Z5 ~7 I3 T! ?The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

; _) T$ B1 g& Z6 \我想我從未表露出
& t( b0 m- }% \% w5 |深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  

+ c" Q* S) C+ yFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

- E0 K$ K5 S2 T9 U' |在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
/ k( s4 Q8 s6 ~/ _+ g& W9 U$ J- z我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

# ^1 ~' f4 ~' S. Y縱然朝夕相處
: R2 F: [7 }0 W8 B* X還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! T) ], _+ s, Y- II would probably know how you feel
, Q4 m( X1 l. U2 a. p3 E) r6 o  J, Y凝視著你的眼
  i9 ~# b4 }6 J搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
& F9 c* ^* Y* ?你的心情

" y4 y" i9 @, Y$ w8 Y- ^Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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) d# t* U  K- B8 Z( R/ A. D. v愛  簡單的一句愛
- Y/ S+ k; V  O$ m4 \8 J為什麼
如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
/ N: v6 l$ G- @( d7 jBut I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
9 ^4 F- E. O# J- `' ^卻總是說不出來
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7 y, q! M9 T$ I2 W4 P. nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ V7 f/ R( w$ s$ |/ Z) J也許有一天
: g, B, ~0 W' `9 e你將從我指間滑漏
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9 V$ ]8 N( {# l" f% V1 `, `If today isn’t too late,
. w* y- B2 U) a% J+ sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
" {* G# ]. D$ H0 }4 H% l讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

2 o& D0 G6 h. g0 s  t$ QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
( v( G% i. }* N8 B& H% _3 PEntrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
" C9 K, @* j3 \5 u, _, F4 Y托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
* k5 x6 {; S3 C% [+ c% x5 QWhy is it so difficult to express?

0 o3 i4 y! E: R9 }" }; T) Z愛  簡單一句愛
# r- O( i+ M& J* l為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

6 C& m+ c! d( l愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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& ?4 X/ F3 P. _3 l0 GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
' v1 h/ q; L0 l* O/ X  C. [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% c9 v3 E2 ~+ a3 ]; h7 |* L3 v
% ^$ f0 b5 s# V8 J: Q9 v* ]& q" T希望今天還不會太晚
! |4 h* d5 R6 `+ a3 |讓我向你表白
, z6 I5 w8 }5 s我心底的秘密
# [3 S0 O$ i8 }9 Y% p: ?
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
% F. i: c) a4 G$ M% ZEntrust my love within your heart
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$ @# x2 t4 s3 J4 a  G: `( m8 g可否讓我托付給你?
$ X! G! {6 z! \. i托付我的愛
收在你心裡

( S$ M4 `: u, B- q6 {0 r2 ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
/ }) @" x$ t$ ~# U  e2 {: v托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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4 |, E3 g# x! S( H3 d& a$ k" u对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
; b3 V% D6 f3 [9 i5 I6 B6 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, d3 m! j9 S# S: HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
9 Z3 Z! ^2 N+ w天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

4 a8 q1 e$ C$ z, a0 E5 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% {8 t! d2 d( O' [& h  UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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- ?7 Z0 }; t9 Z: W月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
) H  _; y% u% l+ M星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
; {( i- \# t: Q& h7 ~; W8 Y終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. O- {& g# L4 _: K% n& u4 K4 ?7 g
你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
$ c, X. S9 Q7 S5 i8 }. D  G愛你
堅定不渝

$ Q( s: o) X5 t5 Z* l8 |% tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ E' o6 g8 q1 X8 ?. D+ T* D
- u$ W0 ?9 m& O% b6 j/ N你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

6 J8 h; D8 f+ L4 V8 o0 |I love you I love you with all my heart
+ M. X1 q6 m- Q' @: gNothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
7 g  q( E' T& T% |# [你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

6 z) ]6 q' m% a! U) ^! f$ }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

  u7 {( n4 I4 v% rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心
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6 I& b+ S2 u5 s9 m+ Z8 y( w: i: ZI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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% h2 J. N. [2 S; R; D5 ]" L我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
9 L& {/ b7 Y0 H! O5 _9 s  Y1 c來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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+ r0 A$ ~$ z1 h3 @9 lI regret not dying
; [5 V' a# w. x, OI only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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可惜我未能以死證明
, `( [. n& x4 X' j0 W5 u我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( h  T1 r! R; ^, _  b5 A" ]如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
5 x* t! a" _% |2 U8 E; O' h8 e千萬個心思
3 D" c3 L7 V7 s% P9 u1 n$ V, [
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
+ v3 Q" m; T& I" y% s愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

1 a5 |+ t% Z! {: e$ N. l5 j7 v) N是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒